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The blurb is pretty good. The throughout story is great as well. Hoping to get more of it. I would suggest you to work on your character designs more. It will definitely put depth on your works.
The Lore of Hegira
TonyaRMoore
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Yay - thanks. Your feedback is very much appreciated. When you say character designs, am I right in thinking it's more along the lines of the character arcs/charcters (personality) development? I feel like I have somewhat of a handle on physical description (I do get lazy sometimes) but I get the sense that my weak area is more fundamental than that. You know, like characters seeming a bit flat as opposed to 3-diminesional, etc... I appreciate you pointing that out. It gives me something tangible to work on. 😎👌
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TonyaRMoore:Yay - thanks. Your feedback is very much appreciated. When you say character designs, am I right in thinking it's more along the lines of the character arcs/charcters (personality) development? I feel like I have somewhat of a handle on physical description (I do get lazy sometimes) but I get the sense that my weak area is more fundamental than that. You know, like characters seeming a bit flat as opposed to 3-diminesional, etc... I appreciate you pointing that out. It gives me something tangible to work on. 😎👌