The main character is your typical overpowered self-insert. He quickly rises to become one of the "Four Great Kings" with basically no struggle or character development. All his opponents are easily dispatched and there is no real threat. Sounds a little cliché to me but The pacing of the story is well-balanced, with a good blend of intense action sequences and quieter moments of character development. Your writing style is smooth and easy to follow, making it accessible to readers of all backgrounds.
HouseOfLee
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SUKAHouseOfLee:Appreciate the review! And no need to worry about the cliche aspect, it focuses on side characters more than phantom mutiny. But in the future I do plan to write out character struggles they had when leveling up!