Review Detail of Zaccharus in BLOOM OF UNSPOKEN LONGING

It is a really interesting story! You have managed to write some very interesting characters. The plot progression is great, and the idea is amazing as well! The biggest problem I found with the story was the sentence structure and the grammar issues, which can be resolved using software like Grammarly. Besides that, I think that this is an amazing read! Looking forward to more! Great work author!