Review Detail of f4L5e in Will of Slaughter

Hey everyone! It feels weird reviewing my own work haha. I just wanted to thank you for coming here. This is my first attempt at writing something and there was not any prior plans or preparations. I decided that I wanted write a web novel just five minutes before I wrote the first chapter. The synopsis of this novel was what I first wrote for chapter 1 but it turned out too short so I just made it into the synopsis lol.I then continued writing whatever came to my mind for the next 5 chapters before I finally stopped.I think now is the time to actually think about what I am doing and what kind of story I want to write going forward. The next chapters I write will be planned and polished(I hope at least). I will try to create my story based on what I have already written in these five chapters so wish me luck🤞!I will appreciate any kind of criticism and feedback so don't hold back. I promise I can take it🤓.Thank you all for reading my work😘