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A book review coming from yours truly, is something rare, so I shall be brief mortal. I liked the idea of being in Maw's body at first, so no cons on that part, but I am aware that people might have a certain negative impression on that. I am here to tell these people, that you guys can read this fanfic without a worry, as it it is really interesting. Regarding the grammar, not much to say besides a few spelling errors, not that important. The pace is not very fast, which is a positive point to this kind of fanfic and the world building along the growth of the chapters its not bad either, not the best there is, but not subpar as well, so no negative review on that. The romance wasn't straight away, although it wasn't shown much interactions between Wanda and Jerry, so its kind of a neutral ground for me, seeing them admit feeling to each other with a somewhat lack of relationship development first, but as I said, the interest this fanfic gives a reader, is somewhat capable of making you overlook that, so read it without a worry. I think that's all, lets see where this goes in the future.

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