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The writing is decent and plot is quite interesting. However, I think most of the chapter are quite too short. I think the appropriate amount would not less than 1000 word per chapter, but it still depend on your judgment. the pacing is also quite fast and everything happen so quick. The introduction on system and world building might be quite abrupt for me. Overall, this work is still a good solid book and I hope you continue writing it!

A Reborn's Privilege

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Anyway thank you for suggestions!! I appreciate it!😊

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As the chapter no. increases the words also increase. In the starting I used to update two chapters both of 800 words. Later I decided to upload only one chapter each of 1100 words..😊