webnovel

Review Detail of XavierKing_6497 in Survival Manual in the Dawn of Time.

Ulasan detail

XavierKing_6497
XavierKing_6497Lv411mthXavierKing_6497

I love the way the story a lot, the world building is okay, liking the update stability but I don't like the way it is short I would prefer you either increase them or do double chapters, and you should also give depth to story for example you can explain things better like his fights with the titans or even his interaction with peoplealso it will be preferable to not summarize them the story too much

Survival Manual in the Dawn of Time.

Hora_Do_Mori

Disukai oleh 1 orang

SUKA
empty img

Tidak ada balasan.Jadilah yang pertama!