honestly i was surprised i went in not expecting much and was pleasantly surprised. The plot so far just gets better the more u read it. The main character comes off as actually smart so u did that great. Information is not kept from us for too long so it ends up as a positive. My only worry is that u don't get repetitive with the way fights go. U also need to be wayyy more descriptive about characters in general makes no sense i only knew the MC had gold eyes and black hair at Ch 40 or so and never know what he's wearing or the state of his clothes. Overall good read here that i can see being great with improvement over time. 👍
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