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Honestly, the writing itself is atrocious with it swapping scenes so often and I honestly could not tell where I was after a while and how quickly it time skipped to the battle of Kage with no warning whatsoever. Also, you kept repeating lines and switching details about the character, going from a bunny to a wolf mask, and then back to a bunny. This story was so confusing to read that I didn't even get through the first chapter due to how chaotic it was.

Natsuko Fifth Hokage

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