Proofread your own work and you'll see the issues yourself. The fic severely lacks in contexts and the grammar needs some work. It has potential and could live up to it if it was properly revised.
Schooldean
Disukai oleh 3 orang
SUKAThat's like asking a blind guy to help another blind guy cross the road. You have killed two people! Here's a thing I should tell you. My English sucks because I have another home language I only use English when I'm trying to convince my supervisor I'm gona need a day off.About my character's relationships or interactions with others. [img=update]
I think it's already obvious so there's no need to point it out other than the issues that needs to be prioritized first, at least in my opinion.
Schooldean:That's like asking a blind guy to help another blind guy cross the road. You have killed two people! Here's a thing I should tell you. My English sucks because I have another home language I only use English when I'm trying to convince my supervisor I'm gona need a day off.About my character's relationships or interactions with others. [img=update]
Schooldean:That's like asking a blind guy to help another blind guy cross the road. You have killed two people! Here's a thing I should tell you. My English sucks because I have another home language I only use English when I'm trying to convince my supervisor I'm gona need a day off.About my character's relationships or interactions with others. [img=update]
Schooldean:That's like asking a blind guy to help another blind guy cross the road. You have killed two people! Here's a thing I should tell you. My English sucks because I have another home language I only use English when I'm trying to convince my supervisor I'm gona need a day off.About my character's relationships or interactions with others. [img=update]