Not too bad! Things I liked was the pacing, narration and how it was simple- it didn’t feel like an info dump or too much all at once. I can’t wait to see how Silver grows with the upcoming chapters [img=recommend]! Suggestions I have for u author is add an image for ur cover, u can do this on through ink stone. Keep writing author [img=coins][img=update]
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