Review Detail of EyeOfSilver in Hollywood: Head-Hunting System

It's got a lot of information dumping but all of that information or filler is essential to create that immersive feeling, in real books their is a lot of the same kind of massive information dump and long introductions and slow writing, it's the same here, his just doing good quality writing and making sure theirs no real plot holes and keeping good quality rather than making it a book where {System gives host mission} {Reward: 100% shares of marvel} would you rather that than this epic character building and immersive story telling?