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Hunter_101
Hunter_101Lv1311mthHunter_101

sometime it doesn't just make sense and the dude kinda talks to his system five chapters completely

Hollywood: Head-Hunting System

TheRamenLord

Disukai oleh 34 orang

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EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv12EyeOfSilver

thanks for the constructive feedback i will definitely reflect on it and try to improve my writing. 😁👍

TheRamenLord
TheRamenLordPenulisTheRamenLord

thanks for the feedback, those were the system introduction and exploring chapters after that you will see that there is almost no system interaction, keeping it to a bare minimum. And you are right the internal monologue chapter should have been spaced apart instead of it being crammed together in 5 back to back chapters but i have learnt from that and improved i think. thanks for reading my work, its my first time writing. I hope you read my latest chapters and see that i have not made the same mistakes. I hope you have a beautiful day 😁👍

Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv1Santy_Melay

Si, y cada vez que entro para darle un oportunidad, no puedo, porque no soporto la interacción con el sistema.

Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4Bob_Uchiha_XD

Delete to the system. Elimina a el sistema.

TheRamenLord:thanks for the feedback, those were the system introduction and exploring chapters after that you will see that there is almost no system interaction, keeping it to a bare minimum. And you are right the internal monologue chapter should have been spaced apart instead of it being crammed together in 5 back to back chapters but i have learnt from that and improved i think. thanks for reading my work, its my first time writing. I hope you read my latest chapters and see that i have not made the same mistakes. I hope you have a beautiful day 😁👍
WizardGhospy
WizardGhospyLv11WizardGhospy

thanks for the waring, i hate sentient system the most