thanks for the feedback, those were the system introduction and exploring chapters after that you will see that there is almost no system interaction, keeping it to a bare minimum. And you are right the internal monologue chapter should have been spaced apart instead of it being crammed together in 5 back to back chapters but i have learnt from that and improved i think. thanks for reading my work, its my first time writing. I hope you read my latest chapters and see that i have not made the same mistakes. I hope you have a beautiful day 😁👍
TheRamenLord:thanks for the feedback, those were the system introduction and exploring chapters after that you will see that there is almost no system interaction, keeping it to a bare minimum. And you are right the internal monologue chapter should have been spaced apart instead of it being crammed together in 5 back to back chapters but i have learnt from that and improved i think. thanks for reading my work, its my first time writing. I hope you read my latest chapters and see that i have not made the same mistakes. I hope you have a beautiful day 😁👍