Review Detail of HaracasAye in Only I Can See The End

Story has a good idea and premise but the author has tried to take on too much all at once. On one hand this novel is a fast paced, high action apocalypse story that is well suited for the webnovel medium while on the other it takes itself too seriously whenever the author deems it necessary for the mc to go through another one of his 'character development' moments. I mean cmon, how am I supposed to care about what happens to characters that were introduced a handful of chapters ago? You would have to be supremely good at characterisation to pull that off and even then nothing is guaranteed. These moments stick out like a sore thumb throughout the whole story for me and lower the overall standard of the novel. Fast paced, high action or a restrained more grounded approach, I would advise the author to choose just one and not try to stick their finger in multiple pies.