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Item: Only I Can See The End
Rating: 4

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MovribsLv11yrMovribs

Pretty cool story, only complaint is that he revealed his ability to a stranger literal seconds after meeting them, you could of delayed it, get a bond to form before doing so. But I guess it is what it is. Everything else is perfect though.

Only I Can See The End

Magecrafter

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MagecrafterPenulisMagecrafter

Thanks for the review. Yeah, I know what he did was stupid, but that's the point. He is pretty naive from the start. That's why he grows as the story progresses. Hope you stick around to see that growth.

1yr

MovribsLv1Movribs

Yeah I enjoy the story so I of course stuck around, loving it so far

Magecrafter:Thanks for the review. Yeah, I know what he did was stupid, but that's the point. He is pretty naive from the start. That's why he grows as the story progresses. Hope you stick around to see that growth.

1yr

MagecrafterPenulisMagecrafter

Glad to hear it

Movribs:Yeah I enjoy the story so I of course stuck around, loving it so far

1yr