MC has a serious problem of pulling undeserved and inexplicable powers out of nowhere while he way too weak. If you're writing a fanfic with the DC universe, use the DC opportunities for that kind of thing. Then the 'mind' inspiration orbs can be used to improve stuff from then on. Also MC wants to plagiarise media from IRL for money which is a red flag for him getting rich without deserving it because he remembers every song and book word for word and note for note guys!
Krishna_Is_Here
Disukai oleh 13 orang
SUKAok the first part is alright because its based off of the novel pocket hunting dimension and the mc there was so op he could destroy the universe with a swipe and he was only using the dimension and eating the orbs for about 5 to 10 years the 2nd part isnt that bad either. if he can take advantage of his knowledge of his money why not?