Review Detail of DEATHS_SHADOW07 in Lost in Sothoryos | A Game of Thrones fanfic
Ulasan detail
the premise is good but I feel some things are just unrealistic and there are almost no mysteries. like Arthur knowing almost everything about sothoryos and magic, it's almost over explained. Might just be me but I don't like the 1st person pov. everything else is great though.
Lost in Sothoryos | A Game of Thrones fanfic
TheManUnderTheBed
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SUKABalasan1
Yeah I get ya, Arthur knowing about magic because of his time with Rhaegar was a bit weak but I couldn’t really explain realistically Jon getting enough mastery of his magic in the time I set, poor writing on my part 😅 Tbf I think there are a few mysteries but most get solved within a few chapters so maybe not. You’re defo right about 1st person I slowly phase it out and as of chapter 17 I think I got rid of it completely so no more 1st person