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currently at ch 36 and so far it's okay including it's some mistakes .I will say it is not that satisfying. I can see some clique here and there. ..but I don't see the meaning Or use of villain, r18, antihero tag.whenever I see villain tag, i unconsciously remember "Reverend insanity" (one of the best fiction along with lord of the mysteries). where mc was actually evil with his own ideology and philosophies. he was smart, ruthless, cunning etc etc, he wasn't a hypocrite, enemies and side character were smart as f , it's life lessons are so great and it's changes people perspective on life ,overall best mc of all time and one of the best fiction i Just wanted to say if mc becomes villain, pls author give mc some philosophies, how he sees the world, people, living beings etc.. and a good reason for his actions . And don't make him a hypocrite. ( treat everyone equally even if it's a child, girl, old lady etc).Give mc some psychological abilities or skills, make him smart and cunning .if a villain is not smart 🤓 them it is just trash, or villain is doing evil for the sake of doing evil without any reasons .Make enemies smart too, .make mc clam and reasonable thinker..well, this are just my expectations but let see how it goes .....I will do another review after I reached ch 50 and decide to continue or not, recommend it others or not.....

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