Review Detail of boby_jordon in I stuck in the anime world by the infinity loop time skill

Item: I stuck in the anime world by the infinity loop time skill
Rating: 3.6

Ulasan detail

boby_jordonLv121yrboby_jordon

you should make the chapters longer and more segmented so it's easier to read and also improve grammar or even make ai write it in a different version. you should also double-check your grammar and plan stories ahead all in all, i like the story il even edit for you

I stuck in the anime world by the infinity loop time skill

thethousand

Disukai oleh 2 orang

SUKA

Balasan4

boby_jordonLv12boby_jordon

Ill really edit just tell me to and i might even add to it if you want just please continuing work on it , (sorry for bad grammar writing in the dark)

1yr

thethousandPenulisthethousand

you can read the the chapter before No1

1yr

thethousandPenulisthethousand

I forgot but I will not stop so don't be sad

1yr

boby_jordonLv12boby_jordon

Sorry man I didint have my phone know I’ backm

thethousand:I forgot but I will not stop so don't be sad

1yr