Author your work is amazing! The writing quality is almost perfect, even as an English major I've found only a few mistakes. I love that you gave Yang Chan a low status background. I like the dynamic between Yang Chan and Amon, I feel like everyone tends to overdo the system, so I find this very refreshing. This is defiantly a hidden gem, and I hope it gets more attention.
ViciousPepper
Liked it!
SUKA