Truthfully, I really love how you explained the setting of your story from the get go. Novels with this kind of world building is interesting and fun to read, and I'm honestly shocked how underrated this is. I guess my advice is to add a touch of comedy or mystery. But still, even without it, this book can still stand on its own. Great work! Can't wait to read more ^_^
Triaxoniko
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