Review Detail of vorlefan in Project New Era

I really like this kind of novel. Its like some addiction for me. It has few chapters so I can't go much deep here. The only thing is missing in order to be better is crafting context about the MC. It would be really nice to create a chapter before it all, or even in the first chapter, showing the struggles, emotional points of the MC, to create a connection with the reader. The other point is the grammar that requires some attention.