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Review Detail of Slow_Neptune in Shadow Fall

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The setup of this story is spectacular, leaving room for the reader to enjoy the protagonist, Alexis, growth. The author takes their time in setting up the characters and situations they find themselves in. Some of the writing could be revised for increased clarity but overall the author expresses the characters' emotions really well.

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Thank you for the feedback. I will go back and touch up on a few of the sections you highlighted. Much appreciated!