Review Detail of The_Exquisite_One in Marvel: The Suns Anomaly

I'm very half and half with this FF. While it doesn't have the usual problems of other FF's in this genre, or grammatical errors. It lacks story and is boring to read. Its just the same thing every chapter of him training achieving something then training again. There is hardly any dialog between him and the other characters in the FF or any character development. The next milestone doesn't feel like anything because there is nothing to strive towards. With no goal in mind, all striving towards strength just seems pointless. What this FF needs right now is something for the story other than the same MCU plot. Be it human bonds like friends or family or you can go full God route. But he needs purpose other than training to stop the next big bad. with the plot being repetitive it's just boring to read. Other than that I believe you have a good story on your hands even with the flaws and has potential to become a great Fanfic. I'll give it a 4 star right now given the FF barley started and I hope to see its improvement over time.