Review Detail of Zefyr in Graveyard Residents

Okay so i must say it got me hooked on , or now i bookmarked it and i hope you post a few more chapters so i have something to read xD. I observed a tiny mistake where you said his landlord threw him on the streets for not paying rent, but then you said he run from home 4 days ago , maybe you'll change that. All in all i think it's a pretty good story.