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Review Detail of BloodRaven in The Great Voyage: Scientists On Straw Hats (One Piece)

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BloodRaven
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This is a good story but it has its problems, the greatest problem of them al is the translation of the names that doesn't fit the original story. If that is fixed than the story is word more stars in the writing quality

The Great Voyage: Scientists On Straw Hats (One Piece)

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Balasan1

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your choice of words is confusing and you miss some letters i think you have a problem with your translation lol (jk)