This fanfiction has developed in a good way, I mean I like it where you show Naruto's strength and emotional development in detail and I think the storyline is right , the storyline should be tagged 'slice of life' which I know and then don't forget the development of the side characters which makes me appreciate your work, good job
SolaceViolet
Disukai oleh 5 orang
SUKATidak ada balasan.Jadilah yang pertama!