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This would be the first time I'd read a FL book that has a ML character as the MC, the beginning was cute and funny with the numerous method in which the females broke his little heart, it's only natural that he makes a promise not to do so again but fails miserably once more. Here's a successful young man after his graduation, the heartbreaker and the one calling the shots. From the synopsis and the little chapters present as of this review, I'd say this is a unique take on this troupe. All that's needed is smoothen out the dialogues, grammar and it would be awesome 👍

Cloaked in an Enigma

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Thanks for the review.😊 And I'll try and work on making more realistic dialogs ... I get a lot of comments about my grammar, I guess I really need to work on that. Thank you.

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Thanks for recommending 🙃 I hope you'd take into account this little thoughts on it

_Queen_A:Thanks for the review.😊 And I'll try and work on making more realistic dialogs ... I get a lot of comments about my grammar, I guess I really need to work on that. Thank you.
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I definitely will. 🙂 Thanks for being honest.

Bloom759:Thanks for recommending 🙃 I hope you'd take into account this little thoughts on it