Review Detail of Hiroton in Code Geass: Reborn Lelouch

This is my first review of a book ever, so please bear with me on this. The overall story is developing fairly well so far and is an enjoyable read, but there are too few chapters and the author hasn't updated this in awhile unlike his other stories so it needs more chapters to get a full grasp if this will continue to be good or not. This is just a pet peeve of mine and don't mind it if you are not of the same mind, but the author on multiple occasions has used sayings from his country in an English novel and they don't seem very compatible with, when he wrote them, they seemed to be very out of place. there are some grammar issues and misspellings, but it seems the author's native language is not English and so it's understandable. The few mistakes that are made really don't detract too much from the ff, sometimes you have to do a little deciphering but it's negligible. I can't really complain as his English is far better than my proficiency is in his native language, which is zero. To the author: please don't drop this as it seems to have a lot of potential and there are not really many code Geass ff, please continue this as I enjoy it.