Review Detail of Tims232 in Void Bringer

The story has the potential to be really great and high in quality if it wasn't for 3 things. First, the grammar is a little off, but that's easily fixable and can be ignored. Second, the main character's personality becomes outright toxic while he's living in the shelter, but I think he's having some character development and fixing this problem. And third, the author gave a part of the main character's inheritance to the girl he was traveling with despite the fact that she is not a void carrier and the main character is the only known void carrier alive in the world today, this seems like self-sabotage or a deliberate attempt to anger the audience on the author's part.