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Ulasan detail
So far from what I've read I enjoy the story just kinda wish the pacing was more managed as some parts feel overly quick but overall greating writing. [img=recommend]
Parallel Log
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YoJinsei19Lv2YoJinsei19
Hi, iam the 2nd author of this novel and thank you for your suggestion! The first 40 chaps aren't the best i know because it was the first time for me and my friend(The author) to work together. But i promise that the novel will get better. There will be short chapters sometimes during the first 40 chaps. [img=strong]👊