Review Detail of DragonImmortal in We Die Young
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I absolutely love the action scenes, I was completely enthralled by Chapter One. The only reason I didn't give 5 stars for every category is because of grammar and punctuation issues here and there. The story is still easy to understand, and the author has so much potential with this plot and their martial arts/descriptive writing talent. You can tell the author is passionate about MMA and how much went into this piece. As the story progresses the writing only gets better. I also like that Gyun has an actual personality, he's not just some 2D OP MC. I think with some tweaks to the synopsis and chapter edits, this novel could rank high in WN. I hope the author will consider stockpiling chapters so we can all continue to enjoy this work even when school starts back!
We Die Young
ForerunnerOfSky
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Thanks my passion is martial arts and exercise but writing and reading hold a special place in my heart so I wanted to write a story about a martial artist. I will fix all the errors you pointed out (thanks so much for that, any improvement is important). I hope to write a novel that displays an actual character on a revenge journey but also someone who hopes to fulfill more the revenge but live a truly happy life. Thanks for reading and helping me improve 🙏 Btw wish me luck tommorows my first day trying BJJ
I can't wait for even more amazing chapters!!! Best of luck, I hope you like Jui-Jitsu...don't break a leg unless it's on purpose...and it's not yours!
ForerunnerOfSky:Thanks my passion is martial arts and exercise but writing and reading hold a special place in my heart so I wanted to write a story about a martial artist. I will fix all the errors you pointed out (thanks so much for that, any improvement is important). I hope to write a novel that displays an actual character on a revenge journey but also someone who hopes to fulfill more the revenge but live a truly happy life. Thanks for reading and helping me improve 🙏 Btw wish me luck tommorows my first day trying BJJ
Update its very fun and everybody is very nice to newbies like me. I did get hip throwed a few time in my first roll (grappling spar) I can feel it in my back still but I love it and it is a workout like no other. My taekwondo instructor comes back from vacation at the end of the month. So I can join back to that
DragonImmortal:I can't wait for even more amazing chapters!!! Best of luck, I hope you like Jui-Jitsu...don't break a leg unless it's on purpose...and it's not yours!image
That's awesome, you make me want to take a random class...but that's a bad idea! I'll stick to Pilates, I'm too much of a clutz. Are you going to take both BJJ and Taekwondo?
ForerunnerOfSky:Update its very fun and everybody is very nice to newbies like me. I did get hip throwed a few time in my first roll (grappling spar) I can feel it in my back still but I love it and it is a workout like no other. My taekwondo instructor comes back from vacation at the end of the month. So I can join back to thatimage
DragonImmortal:That's awesome, you make me want to take a random class...but that's a bad idea! I'll stick to Pilates, I'm too much of a clutz. Are you going to take both BJJ and Taekwondo?image