Review Detail of superAyan in We Die Young
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The writing quality is good, word choices are easier to understand and the author explains any references or ideas that the readers has no knowledge of. It's descriptive, enough to give proper visualization. The plot is interesting, and the way the author narrates is engaging. Keep up the good work, dear author!👏👏
We Die Young
ForerunnerOfSky
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SUKABalasan2
Thank you, the only thing that I notice I don’t know if I’m being to harsh with myself but it’s the lack of character building in early chapters where I introduce a lot of characters but they lack depth. I’m working on building characters that are memorable. Btw if you read from ch 24 to 27 main character (Gyun) steps up his ruthlessness if you want to know.
I don't think thats a problem, you can tell each character's story as the story unfolds, though its just me but its more interesting if you leave room for a reader to wonder what kind of a character one is.
ForerunnerOfSky:Thank you, the only thing that I notice I don’t know if I’m being to harsh with myself but it’s the lack of character building in early chapters where I introduce a lot of characters but they lack depth. I’m working on building characters that are memorable. Btw if you read from ch 24 to 27 main character (Gyun) steps up his ruthlessness if you want to know.