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suraj_s_2349
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overall good fanfiction nice [img=update][img=update]

A New Tempest

Astra178

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Astra178
Astra178PenulisAstra178

While I can agree with what you said, Rimuru is a slime as such he doesn’t have a gender and lost his sex drive. The stories I’ve seen just ignored this aspect and input their fantasies onto Rimuru. In short I hate that stuff. While I can get behind shipping him with characters, I just don’t like RimuruXHarem. I can get behind and probably do a ship like RimuruXCiel or RimuruXChloe. Whenever I see harems in fanfictions its just ”All these characters like Rimuru because I can make them.” And just change those girls personalities to “I want to fuck rimuru” destroying their character entirely. I just prefer inputting actual romance that can try to lead to sex rather than just pure sex and nothing more to the story.

N0_Hope:I'm not going to evaluate because you already warned in the info panel but "no harem "means not a good travel/isekai .. the point of someone from our world reincarnated in the anime world/universe is to enjoy the pleasures of the flesh... what's the point on having power if you are just raw power but no pleasure... the pleasure of battle can get you a bit far in the line of life but the pleasure of the flesh is what matters... would any healthy isekai/anime lover not use that chance to get anything he wants ? I don't think so.... pleasure is the goal of the trip.
Astra178
Astra178PenulisAstra178

Thank You for the support!😁

N0_Hope
N0_HopeLv2N0_Hope

I'm not going to evaluate because you already warned in the info panel but "no harem "means not a good travel/isekai .. the point of someone from our world reincarnated in the anime world/universe is to enjoy the pleasures of the flesh... what's the point on having power if you are just raw power but no pleasure... the pleasure of battle can get you a bit far in the line of life but the pleasure of the flesh is what matters... would any healthy isekai/anime lover not use that chance to get anything he wants ? I don't think so.... pleasure is the goal of the trip.

Astra178:Thank You for the support!😁
MrSimo
MrSimoLv13MrSimo

because harem is garbage, there is no emotion and no actual relationship. it's just random degenerate. to put it simply, harem is overdone and boring

N0_Hope:I'm not going to evaluate because you already warned in the info panel but "no harem "means not a good travel/isekai .. the point of someone from our world reincarnated in the anime world/universe is to enjoy the pleasures of the flesh... what's the point on having power if you are just raw power but no pleasure... the pleasure of battle can get you a bit far in the line of life but the pleasure of the flesh is what matters... would any healthy isekai/anime lover not use that chance to get anything he wants ? I don't think so.... pleasure is the goal of the trip.
N0_Hope
N0_HopeLv2N0_Hope

Emotion ? yeah you could say finding " the one " is important, but why not having " the one " plus a few extra girls for fun . Let's call it concubines if they are not at a lvl of actual love but for pure pleasure.

MrSimo:because harem is garbage, there is no emotion and no actual relationship. it's just random degenerate. to put it simply, harem is overdone and boring
SugarApostle
SugarApostleLv12SugarApostle

Harem you say...harem is utter trash/too boring unless a capable author does it and according to me no sane girl would share her man with someone unless she has ntr fetish and about pleasure, one girl would be more than enough... people these days just themselves as MC's and since the author's decision is final then don't persuade him if you want harem so much then just write a harem novel...

N0_Hope:Emotion ? yeah you could say finding " the one " is important, but why not having " the one " plus a few extra girls for fun . Let's call it concubines if they are not at a lvl of actual love but for pure pleasure.
N0_Hope
N0_HopeLv2N0_Hope

I've tried but my dialogues and narratives are quite bad... too robotic.. I investigated the rules of overlord and goblin slayer's world but when I had it all and was going to write.... when I did a check up it wasn't good...

SugarApostle:Harem you say...harem is utter trash/too boring unless a capable author does it and according to me no sane girl would share her man with someone unless she has ntr fetish and about pleasure, one girl would be more than enough... people these days just themselves as MC's and since the author's decision is final then don't persuade him if you want harem so much then just write a harem novel...
SugarApostle
SugarApostleLv12SugarApostle

Use chat gtp....just give it a summary of your story and it will do the rest and then adjust it according to your needs...

N0_Hope:I've tried but my dialogues and narratives are quite bad... too robotic.. I investigated the rules of overlord and goblin slayer's world but when I had it all and was going to write.... when I did a check up it wasn't good...