Review Detail of sineazaroth in No More Pain For This Villain.

chaps lock up early, which seems to be a mistake. the world building is good, but the writing is a bit weak, although it gets better. a lot gets repeated early on and the pacing is slow. I'm around ch45 and the language took a big shift where the writing becomes eloquent to the point that it is unnatural. it is ok to use exam words occasionally for flavor, but overuse just makes me think content is being written by a robot.