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2023-02-27 13:47

Beautiful. Within the first two chapters I was gobsmacked, rarely have I seen fanfics with such levels of ingenuity and art. The character has great continuity, her actions all making sense (some actions were also cleared up on the latest chapter 4) The story development and world background fermented like wine, and within the first two chapters I was drunk within a cacophony of words. Top tier, perhaps if the author continues to create work of similar quality for this book it would go into my favourites. Although for now we wait, we wait for the book to grow and the future plot to be unraveled.

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