Review Detail of Spelloyal in MCU: The Heavenly Yaksha (A Non-Harem FanFic)

I won't go into too much detail since there are other reviews saying the same thing, but to summarize the author doesn't bother to research basic details like the types and subtypes of Haki, the fact that there are no Tigers in the USA and Lions in the forests and in America . In addition, the characters in general lack basic intelligence, which makes the story somewhat surreal. The author's writing and grammar is good, as long as he fixes these extremely important details and researches before writing he can write a good story, for that story he wrote is not good just sloppy.