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2023-02-09 12:02

This is a good read. Although I hope you can stay persistent to the upload schedule, because some people are impatient like me but it okay if you miss some days. Although there is some minor mistakes towards the spelling and some grammar but you don't need to worry about those stuff. The story is pretty good for now and even later. The people from The novel has some personality in its characters. The main character seem likes he just simping for the female lead and also he is probably going to do revenge I hope and become a villain or anti hero idk . Next, the female leaders to just hate Ethan but I hope it changes in the future. I also hope she can solve her own issues for future chapters. The background characters seem to have some importance not like other novels😐. The world background is pretty cool. You describe where they are going and it is easy to understand where they are because it tell you what is it and where. But as I reader I still want stuff like character images. It hard to think what they look like and I just happen to be curious what they look. The story development is going pretty well. Sometimes I can just wonder what is going to happen for future chapters. Anyways I will support this novel unless it become harem. So that is my review for this novel. I can rate this a 8-9ish out of 10. I hope you don't drop😁

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Sorry if too much to read

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Nah... I appreciate your review even though we are in just the initial stages of the novel. Thanks for pointing out things that seems to be lacking... As for quick updates, it's still not possible to update 2 chapters daily but I hope I can manage that in the future. And don't worry, I am not going to stop updating🍻

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