Review Detail of AkiraLight in I reincarnated in my favorite novel as Darkness

Honestly the concept of the novel is unique and great it my opinion but lacks quality to make it shine. the Grammer is atrocious for the novel making it hard to find much value in the plot and flow when it feels unpolished. The interactions between characters are great but they don't flow well back and forth, this can be attributed with the bad grammar but it feels that at some points in the conversation they stop discussing a certain topic, jump to another one the come back to the original topic. it's hard to notice at times but a second read through and you'll pick up on it. I understand this is the Authors first Novel and they are learning through the development of the novel. I just hope they can come back to the early chapters and edit it as well as not include flags of Brazil or America randomly in the novel.