Review Detail of zigzagzarf in Gaia: The Tormented Loser's Second Chance

Item: Gaia: The Tormented Loser's Second Chance
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zigzagzarfLv11yrzigzagzarf

poorly written...the story is slow and boring...i kept reading hoping it get better but it really dont...the main character is just sad and pathetic

Gaia: The Tormented Loser's Second Chance

GoatedWriterOfTime

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i appreciate the feedback bro! It's my first novel and I have much to learn. Hope to use this as a stepping stone for better works. This is (i think) a short story.

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