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It’s not written too badly and I can get not wanting your character to act like a sociopath with “Gamers Mind”, however making him constantly act like a wimp and having no control over his emotions immediately contradicts him HAVING that skill. It didn’t look bad but I just couldn’t stand the MC.

Another Young Justice Story

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