The main problem with this novel is that its protagonist is too flat, with a basic personality and no charisma, he basically gets carried away by the whole environment and the only times he shows character is for nonsense. a super overpowered system that gives you power just by breathing (sarcasm, you actually have to walk) and after 50 chapters he sets up a group chat since he ran out of ideas. It has some good moments (not enough to read all the chapters). I recommend rewriting the book from scratch, putting the system, the powers, the supernatural world and the daily life part in order.
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