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There is humor that made me laugh out loud a few times, touches of eroticism that despite being small, were exciting, and the characters seem intelligent and not exaggerated (at least not in their behavior). I also like that the system is cheeky and that the MC has actual conversations with it. Usually in these kinds of stories the system is too much like a computer program, with limited interactivity and no personality. The way the system insults the MC definitely spices things up and adds interest. Overall I'd say that the execution of these standard story component is very good, and I can warmly recommend it to anyone looking for a story involving elements of reincarnation, cultivation, systems, fantasy China, and business. If there is one negative to point out, it's that there are grammatical errors. However, the sentence structure is good and there are no spelling or punctuation errors, so it's still easy to read and understand, so it doesn't hurt the enjoyment at all. I'll be following this story because I definitely want to see what happens next.

Sovereign Of Money Dao : IWS

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