Review Detail of AkionF in Love on Trials

Hi, Author! I would like to make some corrections regarding the grammar of the story, though I am not a grammarian but I hope this review helps you. Upon reading the first chapter, the things that I want to point out are; The sentences should end with a period rather than a comma. There were a few spelling mistakes that I had noticed. I commented on one of them. The grammar needs improvement, especially the capitalization of the first letter at the start of the sentence. That's all! Despite the minuses, there are plus factors that I noticed such as the world background. Goodluck on your writing journey!