Review Detail of Cptn_Jaymz in Leveling Up with My Adorable Monster Girl Harem!

Grammar is very bad, often uses the wrong word, or the correct words in the wrong order. Plot is ok. Character development is sporadic. MC and his girls make random decisions sometimes (at least to me). The world, how it works, and some of the history is poorly explained until the later chapters, and even then there are some things that aren't explained. Overall, it was entertaining, but a bit of a pain to read. I hope author keeps writing and getting better. If so, we can look forward to some good stories that keep getting better and better.