23 chaps in and I must say, good job. This story is solid. The characters a reasonable, the story is fairly interesting, you update regularly, and the writing quality is that of a native English speaker. If your looking for something safe to read that won't disappoint you, then this is the thing. However the flip side is also true. We aren't exactly treading new ground here. No new parts of the fantasy genre are being explored. On top of that, there aren't really any literary risks taken. It's a normal story. That's the only flaw I have found. And that's not really a flaw. All in all, not bad at all.
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