Read what was free for a reference point. The good: I like the thorn manipulation it’s unique and I haven’t seen it used before. Updates are pretty stable as well. The bad: grammar is worse than what an eight year old could write. Wrong words, misspelled words, wrong tense, commas and periods randomly used with no rhyme or reason. I understand this might not be the your first language but you choose to write in it. Also the world building is not there at all yet. The readers know nothing about the world he is in. Not going to use coins or FPs to continue reading but good luck
Catastrophy_Y9
Disukai oleh 3 orang
SUKAI try to be fair and honest in my reviews I hope your writing improves and the story does good for you
Catastrophy_Y9:Harsh but not wrong. Thanks for the review