Review Detail of Sir_Killington in Chosen of the Void

Overall, very nice, defined character personalities and emotions. What really stood out was the "Death Game" premise. I'm an indulger of a little Korean show called the Squid Games, so I love stuff like this! There's also a good use of "twisty" story telling that'll keep you guessing on what comes next. For my suggestions on improvement, I'd definitely focus on improving sentence structure, leading into word choice. Other than that, good read!