the story till chapter 31 so far is good, the pace of the story isn't to fast nor to slow. the grammar could use some work, but it isn't bad. the character development for side characters, could use a bit more development. all and all, it's a good story. I hope the author keeps releasing new chapters and doesn't drop this story.
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