Review Detail of Moonlight_senora in Angel's Man Of Steel System

Item: Angel's Man Of Steel System
Rating: 4.4

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Moonlight_senoraLv111yrMoonlight_senora

There surely is potential but the description is a no no for me. The author should probably work on the description. And no cliffhanger, that too should be worked on

Angel's Man Of Steel System

VertiKalEl

Liked it!

SUKA

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VertiKalElPenulisVertiKalEl

I admit I suck at description will try to improve it as for cliffhangers I guess u should pay more attention to that too tnx

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